The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.

The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.
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The chart illustrates the correlation between the
GDP
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growth
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and the
countries
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that are defined
according to
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their approach to global business and level of life. Data presented in percentage per decade for three categories of
countries
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from the 1960s to the 1990s. Over the indicated period, the average annual gross domestic product of wealthy
countries
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decreased, globalizers demonstrated a steady increase
whereas
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the economic
performance
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of
non-globalizers
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fluctuated. In the 1960s, the statistic of the
performance
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of wealthy states was the highest among their counterparts reaching almost five per
cent
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.
In contrast
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, the
GDP
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growth
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among globalizers was two times less effective
whereas
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non-globalizers
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operated with an approximate 1.3 per
cent
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performance
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. Over the next decade, the
GDP
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performance
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gaps between the wealthy, globalizers, and
non-globalizers
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almost closed, counted at an approximate rate of 2.9%, 2.8% and 3.1% respectively. From the 1980s to the 1990s,
countries
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that adopted the global approach presented substantial increases in the average annual
growth
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of domestic product, and gained a leading position with approximately five per
cent
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,
while
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developed counterparts counted for two per
cent
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only. In terms of
non-globalizers
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, from the lowest point of 0.8% annual
GDP
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growth
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in the 1980s they rose moderately to 1.5% and remained the smallest category.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, growth, countries, performance, non-globalizers, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trends
  • affluent nations
  • global business orientation
  • sustained growth
  • investment in technology
  • skilled labor
  • fluctuations
  • global trade
  • vulnerability
  • global market shifts
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • reliance on local markets
  • limited exposure
  • economic downturns
  • implications
  • economic policies
  • strategies
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