the following maps show the changes in the area of school from 1990 to present
The maps below illustrate the changes in the town of Springer from 1970 till now.
Overall
, currently, there is a noticeable improvement in the area. Linking Words
It is clear that
new buildings Linking Words
such
as apartments, schools and airports were added.Linking Words
Additionally
, some of the constructions were shortened and grouped together.
In 1970, a big place was taken by a farm which is located on the east side and on the west a large forest was located near the shop which was only one. Linking Words
Although
, on the left of the store there was a small house, Linking Words
while
on the right even more tinier accommodation was placed. To add there was one more forest on the east side.
In modern times, it is obvious that the previous place which was taken by the farm is shortened as there were added four flats, three shops and one house.Linking Words
Hence
, the Linking Words
quantity
of living places was shortened to 1 and shops doubled from 1 to 5.Change the quantifier
number
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