The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year
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The chart compares the countries in terms of estimated
illeteracy
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illiteracy
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to gender.
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the least indicator experienced in developed countries and
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South Asia had the highest score. The figures
Africa
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and Arab states were almost equal. In developed countries, nearly 1% of
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were
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illiterate
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for
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was slightly more than
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, around 1.5%. Regarding
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Latin
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, the figure for
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was exactly the same as those for
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, at around 10%.
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, around 8% of
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and 20% of
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lived in the East Asia and Oceania.
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, the figure for Africa was almost the same as those for Arab states, at about 30% of
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and 50% of
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. Turning to South Asia, the indicator of
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was 34% and
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had more
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than
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, with approximately 56%.
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