The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the samw two periods.
The pie charts illustrate the level of satisfaction among the
visitors
of Ashdown Use synonyms
Museum
before and after renovation during the same period, breaking down into five different results.
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Overall
, before refurbishment, most Linking Words
visitors
were dissatisfied with the Ashdown Use synonyms
Museum
, Use synonyms
while
the results after refurbishment showed that most people were satisfied with the Linking Words
museum
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, there has been no change in the number of people who have had no response.
Back to the pre-refurbishment period, 40% of Linking Words
visitors
were dissatisfied with the Use synonyms
museum
, 10% more than that satisfied. Use synonyms
Although
the result depicts that 15% of Linking Words
visitors
were very satisfied, 10% were very dissatisfied with the Use synonyms
museum
. Eventually, 5% said that they had no response.
After renovation, the proportion of satisfied Use synonyms
visitors
rose to 40%, compared to the 15% dissatisfied people. Use synonyms
While
the number of very satisfied Linking Words
visitors
rose by 20% after renovation, the figures for the category of very dissatisfied decreased to 5%.Use synonyms
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