The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the samw two periods.
The pie charts illustrate the level of satisfaction among the
visitors
of Ashdown Museum
before and after renovation during the same period, breaking down into five different results.
Overall
, before refurbishment, most visitors
were dissatisfied with the Ashdown Museum
, while
the results after refurbishment showed that most people were satisfied with the museum
. Furthermore
, there has been no change in the number of people who have had no response.
Back to the pre-refurbishment period, 40% of visitors
were dissatisfied with the museum
, 10% more than that satisfied. Although
the result depicts that 15% of visitors
were very satisfied, 10% were very dissatisfied with the museum
. Eventually, 5% said that they had no response.
After renovation, the proportion of satisfied visitors
rose to 40%, compared to the 15% dissatisfied people. While
the number of very satisfied visitors
rose by 20% after renovation, the figures for the category of very dissatisfied decreased to 5%.Submitted by hesam.kord.f on
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