The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and

amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between

1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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analytic report provides information pertaining to the
percentage
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of households which used electrical facilities and the number of
hours
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of housekeeping in one nation from 1920 to 2019. In concise terms, it can be seen that the
percentage
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of all electrical devices which are used in households is increased over the timestamp. It can
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be noted that there is a downward trend in the amount of time spent on doing housework Looking at the figures for the
percentage
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of electrical appliances in
further
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detail, it was evident that the rate of washing machines increased from 40% to 70% between 1920 and 1960.
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it fluctuated and reached approximately 70%
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. Turning to 2 other appliances, it can be seen that there was a gradual increase in both refrigerators and vacuum cleaners from nearly 2% and 30% to roughly 65% and 100% respectively in the period of 40 years. Eventually, the refrigerator rate rose to nearly 100%.
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, the vacuum cleaner's
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remained steady at 100% to the end of the timeframe. Turning forward to the remaining chart, the number of housework per week per household saw a downward trend from 50
hours
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to 20
hours
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in the period of 40 years (between 1920 and 1960 ),
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it slightly decreased to roughly 10
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at the end
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of the timestamp.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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