The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
analytic report provides information pertaining to the percentage
of households which used electrical facilities and the number of hours
of housekeeping in one nation from 1920 to 2019.
In concise terms, it can be seen that the percentage
of all electrical devices which are used in households is increased over the timestamp. It can also
be noted that there is a downward trend in the amount of time spent on doing housework
Looking at the figures for the percentage
of electrical appliances in further
detail, it was evident that the rate of washing machines increased from 40% to 70% between 1920 and 1960. Then
it fluctuated and reached approximately 70% at the end
. Turning to 2 other appliances, it can be seen that there was a gradual increase in both refrigerators and vacuum cleaners from nearly 2% and 30% to roughly 65% and 100% respectively in the period of 40 years. Eventually, the refrigerator rate rose to nearly 100%. However
, the vacuum cleaner's percentage
remained steady at 100% to the end of the timeframe.
Turning forward to the remaining chart, the number of housework per week per household saw a downward trend from 50 hours
to 20 hours
in the period of 40 years (between 1920 and 1960 ), then
it slightly decreased to roughly 10 hours
at the end
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