The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

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The given maps illustrate the layout of the Norbiton industrial town and

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predict its development.

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, the area will go through a complete overhaul to transform its image from a town of industry to a residential zone.

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, there will be more life amenities and improvement of transportation infrastructure. Regarding the East South side of the town, it can be generally seen that all the factories will be replaced by housing areas.

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at present, there are only two ways from the roundabout, there will be more roads connected to three accommodation areas and surrounding the roundabout will be shops and a medical centre.

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at the end

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of the East road, there will be a school

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a playground behind housing areas. Turning towards the North section, the T-junction will cross the river to another residential area which will cause the narrowing of the farmland.

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, more houses will be constructed on the West side for accommodation. Only the river will still remain unaltered,

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from the West to the East.

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
development
infrastructure
manufacturing
facilities
transition
planning
commercial
residential
renovation
urban planning
sustainability
environmental impact
local economy
rejuvenation
construction
modernization
accessibility
demolition
gentrification

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