Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

In

this

day and age, a number of

animals

are becoming extinct

while

others are suffering

similarly

. The principal cause for

this

issue is the polluted environment, yet it can be tackled by the government setting strict laws for the

waste

treatment process. The most significant reason for the extinction of wildlife

animals

is the natural habitat being polluted.

To begin

with, industrialization progresses day by day in metropolises and countryside as well to support the country's development.

Consequently

, the manufacturing processes result in seriously poisoning the natural habitat of

animals

surrounding the industrial areas

due to

water pollution, air pollution and even soil pollution. Thereby, a great number of species will suffer from diseases and

besides

, undergo challenging migration owing to the polluted natural sources.

However

, a potential action can be taken by the authorities having punishment for the lack of responsibility of factories in dealing with

waste

. By forcing every single industry to sign in contract towards dealing with sewage which comes from

manufacturing

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process, the government will have the right to frequently examine and figure out the problems of not radically treating the

waste

.

Moreover

, on condition that the factories do not

treate

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treat

create

the wastewater before releasing it into the environment, they will receive a monetary fine and

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banned from going to work for at least four years. Take Vietnam as a prime example, where the parliament examined a factory in Ho Chi Minh City without announcement,

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some shortcomings in water treatment, afterwards, it had to totally be closed down three years later. In conclusion, the natural habitat of many species

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affected

due to

industrial activities, yet it can be solved by the

authority

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having strict rules for

factories'

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factories waste

waste

treatment programs, leading to minimizing the severe problems of

animals

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these days