The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table depicts how the employees in the British spent their
time
during the previous year.
Overall
, housework was mostly done by the women regardless of the time
during the day. But for men, it was job hunting.
Looking into details, in the morning people engaged mostly in housework, Shopping and job hunting and the proportions of the time
are 68, 46, and 38 percent
respectively. But in the afternoon, visiting relatives and friends, household activities, shopping and watching television have become the most Change the spelling
per cent
time
-consuming routines.
As men do the jobs in most countries they have kept
most of their Verb problem
spent
time
seeking job opportunities than women. It is interesting to note that, girls never went on walking or played sports in the afternoon. Gardening is the favourite.Submitted by wm.asanka.sandaruwan on
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