The table and pie chart illustrate populations in Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and pie chart illustrate populations in Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates statistics regarding
nationalities
in Australia,
while
the table provides data based on their places of residence.
Overall
, it can be seen that the highest
proportion
of people residing in Australia is
Australians
,
whereas
the Dutch and the
Chinese
witness the lowest number.
Additionally
, the majority of the population prefers to live in urban
areas
rather than the countryside. Regarding the pie chart,
Australians
account for the largest
proportion
of the population, comprising approximately three-quarters of all inhabitants in Australia.
This
is followed by other
nationalities
, which account for just under 15%, twice the
proportion
of British people. New
Zealanders
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percentage is 3% ,
while
the combined number of
Chinese
and Dutch nationals is equal to the percentage of New Zealanders. Moving on to the table, most people across all
nationalities
choose to live in urban
areas
rather than rural
areas
.
While
Chinese
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the Chinese
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ranks
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rank
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the highest in
proportion
, with 99% ,
Australians
have the lowest
proportion
, with 80%.
Conversely
, 20% of
Australians
live in the outskirts, making it the largest
proportion
. The remaining
nationalities
have between 10% and 17%, except for the
Chinese
, who have only 1% of their
populations
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population
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residing in rural
areas
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words nationalities, proportion, australians, chinese, areas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 6 times.

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