The table above shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the information and making comparisons where relevant.

The table above shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the information and making comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the proportion of people using phones in 7 different ways over a
period
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of 4 years.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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making calls was by far the most for phone function in 2006, 2008 and 2010,
whereas
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the percentage of searching the internet grew significantly over the same
period
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. On the one hand, the ratio of making
call
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calls
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was the most famous feature, meanwhile, remained stable, approximately 100%.
However
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, the rate of spending and receiving messages was the second biggest in 2006 with 73%,
then
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saw a slight increase from 2008 to 2010.
On the other hand
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, the proportion of having fun on the phones by playing games, music and searching the internet was relatively lower in the first given year, with 17%, 12%, and no data
respectivele
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respectively
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while
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they increased dramatically to 42%, 26% and 73% for the rest of
period
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. Interestingly, the camera function remained stable for the whole 4-year
period
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, around 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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