The table above shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the information and making comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the proportion of people using phones in 7 different ways over a
period
of 4 years.
Overall
, it is clear that
making calls was by far the most for phone function in 2006, 2008 and 2010, whereas
the percentage of searching the internet grew significantly over the same period
.
On the one hand, the ratio of making call
was the most famous feature, meanwhile, remained stable, approximately 100%. Fix the agreement mistake
calls
However
, the rate of spending and receiving messages was the second biggest in 2006 with 73%, then
saw a slight increase from 2008 to 2010.
On the other hand
, the proportion of having fun on the phones by playing games, music and searching the internet was relatively lower in the first given year, with 17%, 12%, and no data respectivele
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respectively
while
they increased dramatically to 42%, 26% and 73% for the rest of period
. Interestingly, the camera function remained stable for the whole 4-year period
, around 70%.Submitted by 2631272260 on
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