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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.
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The charts illustrate the family status of the citizens in two countries:
Canada
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 and
Australia
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.
Overall
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, in both presented regions the majority of the
population
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 are separated but not divorced or married people. It is noteworthy that the same-sex marriage statistics registered in
Canada
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 only. In
Canada
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 separated people who have never been divorced and married accounted for slightly above four-fifths of the total
population
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, with 53% and 29% respectively. The same trend occurs in
Australia
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, albeit with substantial differences in split, where the proportion of separated but not divorced individuals and those who are in marriage relationships presented the similar percentages: 41% and 46% respectively. That means, that the proportion of married couples is roughly three in ten in
Canada
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 and four and a half in ten in
Australia
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. In terms of never married and widowed
population
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, they are registered 7% in
Canada
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 for both categories and 5% and 6% respectively in
Australia
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. There are one per cent of divorced people in
Canada
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,
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 in
Australia
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 their share is dubbed and registered for two percent. Same gender marriage data illustrated in
Canada
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's statistics only and accounted for three percent of the total
Canada
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's
population
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, australia, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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