Topic: the graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.
The line graph compares how many students
who
graduated from universities in Canada in terms of Correct pronoun usage
apply
genders
over the 15-year period between 1992 and 2007.
Fix the agreement mistake
gender
Overall
, it is clear that
figures for both males and females experienced an upward trend over the given period. What stands out is that the total number
of males were
outweighed by females.
In 1992, nearly 100000 female students graduated from universities Correct subject-verb agreement
was
while
the number
for
male students Change preposition
of
were
only about 70000 people. After that, these numbers saw a slight rise in the next 3 years before going down to the previous Correct subject-verb agreement
was
number
in 1998s
.
Correct your spelling
1998
However
, after 1998, the number
of graduated ladies increased considerably and peaked at around 148000 in 2007. By contrast
, the figure for men witnessed a fluctuation in 3 years. This
figure then
went up gradually and reached a peak of two-third
of female graduates.Correct your spelling
two-thirds
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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