The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country.
The bar graph represents the total rate of
films
released and the total rate of cinema
ticket
sales
during the period from 1996 to 2006 in a country.
overall
, it can be seen that in both years the drama
films
released were the highest
while
, the romance
films
were the lowest. in comparison, the
percentage
of comedy
ticket
sales
was the longest, and romance
ticket
sales
still were the smallest. In 1996 the
percentage
of drama
films
released was more popular, over 25 percent
while
in 2006 it increased steadily by 35 percent.
However
, it is followed by comedy
films
at 20% and 25% respectively. The lowest
percentage
of
films
released was romance and it is at the same
percentage
in both years was over 5%.
according to
the total
percentage
of
ticket
sales
, comedy
ticket
sales
in 1996 were exactly 20
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
,
then
in 2006, they experienced an increase of approximately 23%.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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