The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country.
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The bar graph represents the total rate of
films
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released and the total rate of cinema
ticket
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sales
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during the period from 1996 to 2006 in a country.
overall
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, it can be seen that in both years the drama
films
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released were the highest
while
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, the romance
films
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were the lowest. in comparison, the
percentage
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of comedy
ticket
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sales
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was the longest, and romance
ticket
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sales
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still were the smallest. In 1996 the
percentage
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of drama
films
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released was more popular, over 25 percent
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in 2006 it increased steadily by 35 percent.
However
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, it is followed by comedy
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at 20% and 25% respectively. The lowest
percentage
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of
films
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released was romance and it is at the same
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in both years was over 5%.
according to
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the total
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of
ticket
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sales
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, comedy
ticket
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sales
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in 1996 were exactly 20
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per cent
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,
then
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in 2006, they experienced an increase of approximately 23%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words films, ticket, sales, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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