The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
There is a table which has been done for an explanation, providing data about the underground railway transport proportion among six different
countries
. According to
the data, it is essential to note that this
kind of transport system has been the most popular in two countries
, Paris and Tokyo, with more than one thousand passengers per year.
Firstly
, as it can be observed, the first underground railway station among these 9 countries
was located in London, it was opened in 1863 with an overall
length of route, equal 394 kilometres, and later this
trend extended through other countries
, finished by Los Angeles, where the latest and smallest in the length railway station was constructed at the beginning of the twenty-first century. Additionally
, as a matter of fact, citizens in Kyoto and Los Angeles preferred this
view of transportation system at a smaller rate in comparison with other countries
.
Overall
, in accordance with the provided data, there was a huge economic growth among 9 countries
within 138 years starting from 1863.Submitted by akhmedova.mb on
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