Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influ-ence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

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Task Response
Develop your essay further by expanding on your ideas and providing clear examples to support your opinion.
Task Response
Complete your essay with a conclusion summarizing your main points and restating your opinion.
Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure your essay has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion to improve its structure.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use transitions between sentences and paragraphs to improve the flow of your essay.
Task Response
The introduction provides a clear indication of the essay topic and intention to discuss and form an opinion.
Task Achievement
The topic is engaging and allows for a thoughtful exploration of ideas.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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