Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than rural areas. What are the causes and solutions?

Crime

has been increasing in cities

where

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is

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overcrowded.

This

is mainly because of

large

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number

of

people

and unemployment in developed

areas

. There are a

number

of solutions which should

be implement

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to deal with rising

crime

in urban

areas

.

Firstly

, the reason why

crime

higher

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is higher

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in urban

areas

than in

countryside

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the countryside

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is

a

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the

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large

number

of

people

who have not been taught

due to

overpopulation in some countries.

In other words

, some

people

have

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lack

of

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knowledge where they are unable to show their abilities and sometimes they are involved in

crime

to get easy money.

For instance

, India is

the

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developed country and

meanwhile

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crime

has been rising because of overcrowded of illiterate

people

.

Secondly

,

insufficient

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of jobs

also

leads to growing

offenders

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number of offenders

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who have to steal to survive.

As a result

, urban

areas

always have

issue

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issues

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with increasing

crime

. There are two effective solutions to the problem of high

crime

. One way to tackle

this

is to ensure that refugees are taken control by the

government

after crossing the border and

do

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not let everyone enter the country without

reasons

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reason

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. To illustrate,

great

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number

of

people

want to get into

United

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Kingdom,

however

,

government

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does not allow to do it for everyone. So, by doing

this

, it will help citizens to be

safety

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. Another method is

supporting

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from the

government

which provides

subsidy

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subsidies

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for

people

who have ideas to implement. It can reduce unemployment among citizens and foreigners because if they hired other

people

to work on their projects it would provide workplaces.

This

solution would hopefully prevent

crime

in urban

areas

which is rising day by day. In conclusion, close observation

for

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each entering person and subsidy from the

government

or investors are effective in dealing with

this

issue. If

government

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the government

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implemented

this solutions

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,

crime

in urban

areas

would soon drop.