Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than rural areas. What are the causes and solutions?
Crime
has been increasing in cities Use synonyms
where
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that
is
overcrowded. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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a large
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number
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people
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areas
. There are a Use synonyms
number
of solutions which should Use synonyms
be implement
to deal with rising Change the verb form
be implemented
crime
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areas
.
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Firstly
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crime
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higher
in urban Add a missing verb
is higher
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than in Use synonyms
countryside
is Correct article usage
the countryside
a
large Correct article usage
the
number
of Use synonyms
people
who have not been taught Use synonyms
due to
overpopulation in some countries. Linking Words
In other words
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people
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have
lack Unnecessary verb
apply
of
knowledge where they are unable to show their abilities and sometimes they are involved in Change preposition
apply
crime
to get easy money. Use synonyms
For instance
, India is Linking Words
the
developed country and Correct article usage
a
meanwhile
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meanwhile,
crime
has been rising because of overcrowded of illiterate Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
insufficient
of jobs Correct article usage
an insufficient
also
leads to growing Linking Words
offenders
who have to steal to survive. Correct quantifier usage
number of offenders
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areas
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issue
with increasing Fix the agreement mistake
issues
crime
.
There are two effective solutions to the problem of high Use synonyms
crime
. One way to tackle Use synonyms
this
is to ensure that refugees are taken control by the Linking Words
government
after crossing the border and Use synonyms
do
not let everyone enter the country without Unnecessary verb
apply
reasons
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reason
great
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a great
the great
number
of Use synonyms
people
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United
Kingdom, Correct article usage
the United
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government
does not allow to do it for everyone. So, by doing Add an article
the government
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, it will help citizens to be Linking Words
safety
. Another method is Replace the word
safe
supporting
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support
government
which provides Use synonyms
subsidy
for Fix the agreement mistake
subsidies
people
who have ideas to implement. It can reduce unemployment among citizens and foreigners because if they hired other Use synonyms
people
to work on their projects it would provide workplaces. Use synonyms
This
solution would hopefully prevent Linking Words
crime
in urban Use synonyms
areas
which is rising day by day.
In conclusion, close observation Use synonyms
for
each entering person and subsidy from the Change preposition
of
government
or investors are effective in dealing with Use synonyms
this
issue. If Linking Words
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government
implemented Correct article usage
the government
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, Change the determiner
this solution
these solutions
crime
in urban Use synonyms
areas
would soon drop.Use synonyms
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