The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the modifications that have taken place in the library between five years ago and the present.
Overall
,
it is clear that
some parts of the library remain the same
while
several of them have only changed their proposals.
However
, fewer things are added.
To begin
with, the librarian's desk, entrance and stairs stay in the same position as in the previous year. The old newspaper and periodicals areas were replaced by films and DVDs and two new computers were set in below the entertainment. The eight old single tables were taken over by four new long ones. The children's area appeared on the top of the tables and the entertainment area.
Additionally
,
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and history shelves were shrunk and the history block was relocated to the bottom and the
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block was in the third order from the bottom. Four new shelves were installed comprising fiction which was in the second order and kitchen, Economics and law which were in the fourth, the fifth and the sixth respectively.
Besides
, The old fiction zone was repurposed into children's books.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • modernize
  • technological facilities
  • computer stations
  • digital book borrowing
  • interactive learning
  • family-friendly spaces
  • cafe or lounge area
  • social interaction
  • open spaces
  • flexible seating arrangements
  • collaborative work
  • community events
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