The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates how
plastic
bottles are processed, recycled, and ultimately converted into end
products
.
Overall
, the process consists of 9 stages, commencing with people throwing out their
plastic
garbage and ending with the production of final
products
.
At the first stage
in the process, people put things made of
plastic
in the recycle bins.
Next,
waste collection professionals will drive collection vehicles to transport these abandoned
products
back to the recycling centre. Those
products
will
then
be sorted into the correct categories, followed by being compressed into blocks in the shape of a square. In the following stage, the compressed blocks will be crushed, and the material produced here will experience a washing process by soaking in clear water. After washing is completed, a machine will turn them into
plastic
pellets, and heat them to form the raw material of
plastic
. The raw material will be collected and packed.
Finally
, they can be utilised to generate end
products
,
such
as clothes, bottles, pens, and so on.
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