The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

Presented in the two maps is information pertaining to changes that are going to occur in Bunborough village from the present day until the year 2024. From an observation perspective, a noticeable transformation will be made, including the installation of more transportation amenities and the construction of residential facilities.

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, the beach, shops and the whole north-western area will remain intact. Beginning with the western half of the map, it is apparent that there will be an installation of a railway going across the town.

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, a new route will

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be added to the southern existing road which leads directly to the residential area. Regarding the east, two hotels will be built in both northern and southern areas,

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the fishing port will be torn down and replaced with a promenade opposite

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the beach.

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the construction of the roads mentioned before, the houses will be demolished and rebuilt in the north.

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