The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellón in recent times.

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The two maps depict obvious shifts which encompass the development of the Spanish metropolis of Castellon from the year 2000 until now.

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, there was a replacement of the green zone with up-to-date amenities,

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the central neighbourhood alongside transportation infrastructure extremely flourished throughout the period.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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2 paragraphs

46 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban development
infrastructure
pedestrian zones
residential areas
commercial growth
industrial expansion
environmental sustainability
public transport system
connectivity
housing units
green spaces
population density
city center
transportation developments
pollution reduction

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The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellón in recent times.

.Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think that success is much related to mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people,s private life while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.