The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The diagram below illustrates selected destinations where the British emigrated between 2004 and 2007.
Overall
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, Australia seemed to be an impressive country to live in both 4 years mentioned with over 30 thousand people going ,
on the other hand
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, only a small group of individuals moved to New Zealand and the USA.
Firstly
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, in 2004, the Kangaroo region, Australia, was where the British went most, followed by Spain as the
second,
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nevertheless
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, the rest 3 countries had the same number of migrants at approximately 25 thousand folks,
besides
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that, a year later, 2005, the first position was still the same but the second was occupied by 2 states, Spain and France,
additionally
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, the United States was the lowest.
Secondly
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, in 2006, the new citizens of Australia reached over 50k and were considered the greatest amount, at that year, New Zealand could not receive the migrants as many as it should when compared to others and French was in third place,
furthermore
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, the 2007's chart was similar to the 2006's one but at the time French was the fifth.
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