The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the current layout and the proposed development plan which will be constructed in the Autumn
in
Change preposition
of
show examples
this
year in the village of Bunborough.
Overall
, the main change in the proposed development of
this
village will be the new road systems and the replacement of the fishing port with a hotel and its walkway.
According to
the proposed project, a
railways
Fix the agreement mistake
railway
show examples
track will be laid through the populated area running between North-East to south within the territory.
Moreover
, an additional road will be introduced, linking the existing road system to provide easy access to the village from Lynwich. Another noticeable change is
that
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
the demolition of the fishing port which
is appeared
Wrong verb form
appears
show examples
to be the current source of income. But with the construction of new hotels with a promenade will attract
tourist
Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
show examples
and create job opportunities for the villagers.
In addition
to
this
,
few
Correct article usage
a few
show examples
houses closer to the river will be relocated and the area will be given
for
Change preposition
to
show examples
the railway station.
Submitted by wm.asanka.sandaruwan on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
What to do next:
Look at other essays: