The map shows the change of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994.

The map shows the change of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map shows the change of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994.
The map diagram illustrates a
Village
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known as Chorleywood about its changes between 1868 and 1994.
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,The
village
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underwent huge changes from no proper transport facility to three different
transportations
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ways. In four sub-divided periods from1868 to 1994.
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with, from the period 1868 to 1883, there is evidence of a constructed main road to the east and north of the Chorleywood
park
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and golf course. over a thirty-nine year period, there were no
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other
transporting-ways
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transporting ways
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were developed until 1970. North-east of the
village
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was developed with motorways from north to south to the east of Chorleywood station between 1922-1970. In 1909 a railway track was built in the mid-lower part of the countryside from east to west, In the
last
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two decades, the
village
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was completely improved with three ways of transportation namely the Main Road, Motorway and Railway.
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,
at the end
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of the period, the
village
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consisted mostly of the Main road followed by a Railway track and a Motorway.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • recreational areas
  • conservation efforts
  • commercial areas
  • technological advancements
  • demographic shifts
  • preservation
  • historical buildings
  • evolution
  • residential areas
  • public services
  • economic changes
  • green spaces
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