There is a division of opinions regarding the impact of modern
on human connectivity, with some asserting/believing that it has fostered/encouraged/promoted greater unity
others argue that it has resulted in
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division. I believe that
has created more positive impacts rather than negatives.
,
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has undeniably transformed the way we
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and communicate with one another. Social media preforms, video conferencing and instant messaging have revolutionised how we interact.
, it has broken the geographical barrier, enabling individuals to connect with friends and families regardless of distance.
, during COVID,
were forbidden to visit different households and maintain social distancing to prevent the spread of disease, a lot of
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.
, others are concerned that modern
has led to social fragmentation and isolation. The over-reliance on digital communication has eroded/
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/
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interaction, diminishing the depth and quality of relationships.
, many young
these days are very addicted to their
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, in
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of physically “hanging out” with friends, they rather stay behind the phone,
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to decreased attention spans, and
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interpersonal skills, hindering meaningful connections and empathy.
In conclusion,
modern
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presented challenges that might divide us,
, it has given us the great opportunity and accessibility to
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with
at our fingertips, regardless
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distances