Global warming is one of the biggest threats human faces in 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at an alarming rate. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions?

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Climate change is one of the biggest problems earth is facing today. We have more summers than winters, and
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the issues associated with global warming and some plausible solutions that might help to deal with the problems.
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of sea levels is the threat of flooding in coastal areas. There is a possibility
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loss of natural habitat including humans and a myriad species.
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Introduction
The introduction effectively sets the stage for discussing global warming, but it could be enhanced by directly addressing the question's two-part structure (problems and solutions) from the outset.
Content Coverage
For a more complete response, ensure the essay covers both aspects of the question comprehensively. This includes detailed exploration of problems associated with global warming and a range of possible solutions.
Specificity
Adding specific examples and evidence to support your points will strengthen your argument and make your response more compelling.
Conclusion
A conclusion that summarises the discussion and reiterates the main solutions proposed would provide a strong finish to your essay.
Structure
Maintain coherence by logically structuring your essay into clear paragraphs, each dedicated to a specific aspect of the topic.
Linking
Use linking words and phrases to enhance the flow of your essay and clearly show the relationship between ideas.
Introduction
Efficient use of an introduction to set the context of global warming.
Content Breadth
Acknowledgment of a variety of issues related to global warming, offering breadth in your answer.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • sea levels
  • alarming rate
  • flooding
  • coastal areas
  • biodiversity loss
  • displacement
  • agricultural lands
  • soil fertility
  • saltwater intrusion
  • food security
  • renewable energy sources
  • emission
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate-smart agricultural practices
  • water efficiency
  • coastal defenses
  • sea walls
  • flood barriers
  • conservation
  • restoration
  • ecosystems
  • mangroves
  • salt marshes
  • coral reefs
  • storm surges
  • CO2 absorption
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