The line graph shows visits to and from UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

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The line graph illustrates the number of

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citizens who had visited foreign countries

as well as

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how many

visitors

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there were to the

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from other states between 1979 to 1999. The bar chart provides information about 5 top states visited by British

residents

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in 1999.

Overall

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, it can be seen that there was an increase in the number of

visitors

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to and from the

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and there were more visits abroad by

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residents

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than visits to the

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by overseas

residents

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over the period.

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, the most popular country to visit by

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residents

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was France in 1999.

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the line graph in 1979 tourism by

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foreign citizens to the

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began with 10 million

visitors

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, increased gradually until hit its peak in 1999 with 28 million tourists. In comparison to that visits to the

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by overseas

residents

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were approximately 10

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in 1979 and after that period experienced a slight increase and

then

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rose sharply to about 30 million

visitors

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in 1999.

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, France was the most preferred destination for

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residents

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in 1999 followed by Spain,USA and Greece. Meanwhile, Turkey was the less attractive destination chosen to visit by British people.

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Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, visitors, residents with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

199 words

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