More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that raising the prices of fast food will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, more and more

people

are busy because of their heavy workloads and they cannot spend enough time to eat meals appropriately.

This

situation leads them to eat fast

food

which makes them overweight.

However

, there is a statement that

people

will less consume fast

food

if the government increase the

prices

. Personally, I disagree with

this

suggestion because the c

To begin

with, raising the

prices

of fast

food

cannot solve

this

issue because the main reason individuals have fast

food

is the time, not the

prices

.

For instance

, workers, especially in Korea, sometimes enjoy fast

food

for lunch

such

as Hamburgers since it comes out quicker than other restaurants.

Although

we know the quality of fast

food

is bad for our health and obesity, we choose it because of its convenience.

Therefore

, we cannot avoid eating fast

food

in a hectic society and

people

will still eat fast

food

even if its

prices

are boosted.

Additionally

, there are other reasons for gaining weight without eating specific

food

.

Firstly

,

due to

workloads,

people

have dinner late at night. They don't have the energy to cook, so they eat microwave

food

which has many harmful ingredients,

this

leads to obesity.

Secondly

,

people

nowadays don't exercise much compared to the past

due to

the development of technology. Watching videos or playing games are more popular than activities, which makes

people

gain more weight

due to

insufficient

of

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physical activities. In conclusion, I firmly disagree with raising the

prices

of fast

food

since it will deprive individuals freedom to choose to eat fast

food

for not waste time eating. I personally believe that there are more serious reasons for being overweight not just by having fast

food

.