You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter, •say which points in the article you agree with •explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres •offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
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Dear Sir
I am writing
this
letter regarding a recently published article in the Times newspaper. I am not completely inclined to the opinion that all town centres in the United States are very similar to each other. However
, I do agree that they have the same transportation system and parking garages.
On the other hand
, towns have different types of buildings, which are according to
traditional values believed by the people. For instance
, if there are folks, who believe in the Hindu religion living in the town, there would be more temples instead
of churches. Moreover
, it has been observed that Mexican communities like colourful monuments, which stand out as authentic in a particular town.
I live in Dinkitown, and we have a mixed culture of people coming from India and Mexico. Therefore
, you will see a lot of spiritual places like temples and churches near the north. If you go more towards the centre and the south, you will see a lot of beaches with colourful homes on the outskirts. The west and east sides are mostly covered by government buildings.
Regards,
AnmolSubmitted by anmols23oct on
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coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter, with a clear greeting, introduction of the topic, development of points, and a polite closing, is commendable.