The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate how much money was spent and received in one year by a children's charity located in the USA. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, the
revenue
sources
bigger than the expenditures. The children's charity got
revenue
mostly from donated food and spent more than half of the money to run the program services.
Furthermore
, there are 5 major types of
revenue
sources
,
while
there are only three kinds of expenditures. In terms of how the children's charity gains
revenue
, donated food dominated the
revenue
sources
with 86.6%. Meanwhile, the second source is community contributions
accounted
Wrong verb form
accounting
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for 10.4%. The other
sources
come from program
revenue
, investment income, government grants, and other incomes made up 2.2%, 0.2%, 0.2%, and 0.4% respectively. Regarding the amount of money spent, program services constituted 95.8%.
In addition
, the other expenditures are fundraising stood at 2.6% and management and general made up only 1.6%.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue, sources with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • children's charity
  • expenditure
  • income
  • donations
  • individuals
  • corporations
  • government grants
  • administrative costs
  • fundraising activities
  • direct aid
  • disparities
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • balance
  • implications
  • operations
  • future focus
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