Student should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Full
cost Add an article
The full
for
study should be paid by students Change preposition
of
due to
the personal benefits of university
education. Correct article usage
a university
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author agree
with Change the verb form
agrees
this
statement because knowledge in university
just serve
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serves
for
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apply
individuals
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individuals'
individual's
future
and unversity
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university
simply
a Add a missing verb
is simply
service
.
First,
university
education just serve
for students Change the verb form
serves
future
. In order words, they gain knowledge about their future
career from unversity
in order to help them survive in society in the Correct your spelling
university
future
. So that
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apply
this
is just a personal purpose, doesn't
benefit Correct word choice
and doesn't
association
. Correct article usage
the association
For example
, an article illustrate
that many people nowadays Change the verb form
illustrates
said
that they study Wrong verb form
say
inversity
to serve Correct your spelling
university
diversity
for
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apply
theirself
in the Correct your spelling
themselves
future
.
Futhermore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
university
simply
a Add a missing verb
is simply
service
and people have to pay money
to use that service
. To explain, in university
, student
can choose what they want to learn and the career that they want to have. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Moreover
, unversities
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universities
also
need money
to remain active and upgrate
their facilities. So, basically, Correct your spelling
upgrade
this
system just
like many other services and Add a missing verb
is just
student
have to pay a sum of Fix the agreement mistake
students
money
to use it, obviously.
In conclusion, students have to pay all cost
for their Fix the agreement mistake
costs
study
because Fix the agreement mistake
studies
unversity
education just Correct your spelling
university
serve
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serves
for
their Change preposition
apply
future
and it simply a service
so it still need
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needs
money
to remain operating and upgrate
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upgrade
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facilities.Correct pronoun usage
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task response
Your essay presents a clear position throughout, but could be improved by developing your ideas more fully with further explanations and a variety of examples.
coherence and cohesion
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language use
Try to diversify your vocabulary to avoid repetition and to make your argument more persuasive. Using a wider range of vocabulary can also demonstrate your language skills more effectively.
structure
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task response
You managed to sustain a clear position throughout the essay, addressing the prompt directly. This shows a good understanding of the task at hand.
Your opinion
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