There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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globalization

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affected

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all sectors

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the world.

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, many opportunities have been created to bring people, businesses

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regions together.

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there are some

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towards

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approach,

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area of its pros can not be overlooked.

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essay will support the current trends of

globalization

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, if we look

around

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the things near us, most of the them are results

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due to

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concepts of

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globalization

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platform, it was

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developed in order to communicate business ideas among business people, but after the

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pandemic situation, almost all the educational institutions

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platform to continue

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academic activities. The students who

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benefit from that shift may be from

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families who

opposes

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globalization

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, it is every individual's duty to support it rather than

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the way of progress.

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of international influence,

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of people

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been drastically enhanced.

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pharmaceutical

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industry has come up with many medicines that can cure so

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diseases that were considered to be incurable in the past

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as Tuberculosis

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the exchange

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information through research findings. If we could not afford

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drugs, most of the

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in the under-developed countries would have

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. In conclusion, it should be noted that

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it is the duty of each person to help in improving foreign affairs rather than opposing it. By doing so,

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can get the full advantage out

from

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it.