The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the

The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the
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bar chart illustrates how often each type of transport was used from 1990 to 2000 by passengers, There are five different
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of transportation broken down by bicycle, motorbike, air, bus and rail. Generally speaking, the total saw an upward trend over the measured period.
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, buses and rails were significantly more popular. In 1990, roughly 40
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kilometres were travelled by bus users, closely followed by about 35
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for railway commuters. Over the following decade, both the bus and train saw marginal rises in popularity, with the total distance covered increasing by more or less 2
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for each. Turning to less
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modes of transport, in 1990, the number of kilometres travelled by motorbike was the highest at about 4
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, compared to nearly 3
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by bicycle and just under 1
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by air. After 10 years, motorbikes and bicycles experienced a decline in levels of usage, with respective figures dropping by around 1
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and 2
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the figure for air travel increased dramatically by approximately 3
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