the chart below shows the changes that took place in 3 different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 - 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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graph illustrates 3 types of criminal Correct your spelling
The
activities
in Newport City which were altered in a 9-year period, from 2003 to 2012.
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Overall
, it can be seen that over these 9 years, the number of criminal Linking Words
activities
which were caused by burglary decreased Use synonyms
while
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car
theft and robbery had a plateau movement.
On the one hand, in 2003 the highest Use synonyms
amount
of crime rate was burglary with about 3500 incidents and Use synonyms
this
rate increased by 10% in the following year which was the peak. In the next 4 years, Linking Words
however
, Linking Words
this
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amount
experienced a dramatic 75% drop where it reached more than 1000 burglary Use synonyms
accidents
. From 2008 to 2012 Use synonyms
this
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amount
fluctuated between 1500 and 1000 Use synonyms
accidents
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as well as
reach more than 1200 incidents in 2012.
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On the other hand
, in 2003 Linking Words
car
theft was the second-highest Use synonyms
amount
of criminal Use synonyms
activities
in Newport city with more than 2500 Use synonyms
accidents
in that year. Use synonyms
This
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amount
stayed the same until 2005 which saw a 20% reduction. Use synonyms
Also
, after a fluctuating movement from 2006 to 2008, the number of Linking Words
car
thefts increased gradually by about 20% and reached the same level that it was in 2003. Use synonyms
While
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the
robbery from other people had a plateau movement in these 9 years with only 500 Correct article usage
apply
accidents
, Use synonyms
car
theft with less than 2500 Use synonyms
accidents
in 2012 was the highest Use synonyms
amount
of criminal Use synonyms
activities
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in contrast
to the two other sections.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "plateau" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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