The diagram below shows the structure of a home smokery and how it works.

The diagram below shows the structure of a home smokery and how it works.
The diagram illustrates the components of a home smoker and how it is used in the process of making smoked
fish
.
Overall
, the home smokery mainly consists of two rectangular chambers underground
ventilate
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to ventilate
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air
and produce
smoke
, and one
firebox
above to
smoke
the
fish
. The process of smokery needs fresh
air
, wood
smoke
and
fish
high up the
firebox
.
Firstly
, the lid of the first part is open so that natural
air
can pass through and
then
move forward along the tunnel.
Secondly
, the piled logs are smouldering and burning on the fire with the assistance of clean
air
, thereby volumes of
smoke
generated
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. In order to create an enclosed environment, the lid on the top must be closed so that
smoke
would not let out.
Following
this
, the
smoke
travels into the
firebox
on the ground through a narrow pipe connected to the underground chamber. The
last
stage is carried out where various
fish
hung on the
firebox
are heated for hours until they are infused with truly smokey flavoured.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, air, smoke, firebox with synonyms.
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