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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
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The attached
table
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 represents the
number
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 of individuals living in each other's countries in 5 different nations, namely British,
Germany
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, Italian, Polish, and Spanish in 2011 with a total section for each
country
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.
Overall
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,
Germany
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 recorded the highest
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 in population reaching over a million
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number of
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people
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. As presented in the
table
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, the British
country
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 has the highest
number
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 of Polish
people
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 with a total of over one million.
Germany
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on the other hand
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, has more Italian
people
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 compared with the rest of the countries with a total of 1.198.000. Italy has more Polish
people
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 living there with a total of 196.000.
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, Polish
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 has more German
people
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 compared with the rest, reaching a total of 6,000 which in fact, is the lowest
number
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 of total
people
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 in all countries represented in the
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.
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, Spanish
country
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 has more British
people
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 living there with a total
number
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 of 861.000. In a nutshell, we can clearly state from the
table
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 that
Germany
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 recorded the highest
number
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 of
people
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.
In contrast
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, Poland recorded the lowest
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 of
people
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 living there.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words table, number, germany, country, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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