It’s better to buy just a few expensive clothes rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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people

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are tend

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to buy

an

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expensive

clothes

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instead

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of getting a lot of cheaper

clothes

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.

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essay will agree with

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statement.

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,

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will discuss

on

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how the

quality

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of the

clothes

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is more important than the quantity of the

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.

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that, it will discuss how

people

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are attracted towards

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expensive

brands

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. In the current situation, the

quality

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of the dresses

are

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determined

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price. As

quality

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is

important

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than quantity, nowadays the

quality

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of

the

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apply

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expensive

clothes

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are

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better when compared to

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cheaper

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. I will be the best example for the scenario. Previously I used to buy a lot of

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which were available for

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cheaper price.

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of

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, these

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losted

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lost

me for only a couple of months. After analysing

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, I

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bought

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some

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expensive

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and checked how long I was using

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. Surprisingly, the

clothes

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which I

has

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bought for

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higher price

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lost

me for

upto

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up to

six months, which is equivalent to buying

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cheaper

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for

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every two months.

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, the majority of the

people

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are

attaracted

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attracted

towards buying the

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from

a well known

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well known brands

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brands

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such

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as GUCCI, Michael Kors etc. The recent survey, which was taken among the

differents

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different

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brands

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of

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says that

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the number of items that are sold on the

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brands

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tremendously higher than the other

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. Even though the

quality

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of the products

are

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the same,

people

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are attracted towards the well

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brands

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. In conclusion, the

quality

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of the

clothes

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are

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more important than the

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quantity

quanity

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quantity

of the

clothes

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.

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of

this

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, the expensive

clothes

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is

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are

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of higher

quality

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when compared to the cheaper

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.

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the expensive

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are more popular,

people

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should try to explore different

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.

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of

this

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, the opportunity

of

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the other

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will be increased.