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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following chart illustrates what
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 students from a specific university did establishing their bachelor’s degree course.
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 table demonstrates the paycheck of the anthologists after five years of employment.
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, the chart revealed that most
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graduates
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 in a full-time job, and the
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 percentage of them
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 in a part-time
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 and attend a postgraduate course,
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 the table shows that the governmental sector pays the highest salary after five years of employment, and private companies pay the lowest. It is evident from the information provided that the majority of
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graduates
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work
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 in a full-time job with a percentage of 52%, followed by 15% of them who were employed in a
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part-time job
. Unfortunately, some of the
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 did not find a career and stayed unemployed representing 12% of the total number.
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, most of the
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graduates
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 had enough time to do both a part-time job and a postgraduate study, but they were the minority—only 5% of the total number. Moving to the table providing information about the income of
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graduates
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 after five years
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 the type of employment, it is clearly obvious that the governmental sector pays the highest salary 50% , and a little below that of the freelance consultants, which pay 40%.
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, private companies pay the lowest, with only 30%, as shown.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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