The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.
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The line graph provides information about the level of three criminal activities namely, burglary, car theft and robbery
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place in the city of Panama between 2010 and 2019.
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to varying extent, both burglary and car theft saw a decrease towards the end of the period,
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robbery remained at a relatively stable rate throughout. Looking specifically at the two top-rated crimes, burglary ranked the highest in 2010, with figures of just under 3500 incidents,
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rose slightly by about 400 a year later, but plummeted to 1000 in 2015, and from there, it remained constant
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.
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, hijacking of cars was the second-rated unlawful act of 2010 at approximately 2900, stayed the same for two years,
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dropped sharply to a little above 2000 in 2013, and fluctuated around that range until it grew marginally to roughly 2800. Notably, accounting for the leading issue of 2019. With regards to robbery,
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witnessed brief erratic changes but maintained the same range of 500 to 1000 from the start of the year to the end.
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