The graph below shows the number of hours per day on average that children spent watching television between 1950 and 2010.

The graph below shows the number of hours per day on average that children spent watching television between 1950 and 2010.
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The line graph provides data on the time duration in which children use television in a day decennially from 1950 to 2010.
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, for most of the years, the amount of television watchers grew substantially.
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number reduced slightly towards the end of the year. In the first 30 years, there was a viewing of a little above zero hours in one day,
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value grew steadily for about 10 years, and from there, rose significantly to a peak of four hours by 1980. Two decades later, the hours spent on TV stayed relatively the same, ranging from 3.9 to 4.1 screen time,
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experienced a slight dip around 3.5 in 2010.
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