The bar graph shows the number of man and woman participants in the olympics between 1924 to 2012

There are two graphs giving information on the

number

of

participants

in the Olympics from 1924 to 2012. The bar chart indicates the

number

of athletes by

genders

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gender

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, and the line graph illustrates the total

number

of people

took

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part in the Olympics over the period. In General, male

participants

outnumbered female

participants

in the four years, 1924, 1952, 1984 and 2012. It is

also

clear to see that the total

number

of Olympic sports players kept an upward trend over the nine decades. In 1924, there were almost 3000 men

athelets

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athletes

participated

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Olympic

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Olympics

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whereas

only approximately one hundred women

athelets

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athletes

competed in the same year. In the later three years, the figure of male

participants

grew gradually and reached nearly 6000 in the year

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2012. The figure

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female

participants

followed the same pattern,

however

, its increase from 1984 to 2012 was dramatic, from 1500 to about 3800.

Therefore

, as a whole, the total

number

went up steadily from just over 3000 in 1924 to about 6500 in 1984, and

then

it soared to 11000 in 2012.