In
this
digital age, in many
of Change preposition
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movies
, lots of
typeFix the agreement mistake
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of movie genres
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produced. Some are positive but some may
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badCorrect article usage
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impact
toChange preposition
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the Correct article usage
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communication
such
as
violence
. Many citizens
beliveCorrect your spelling
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that the government should regulate the level of
violence
while
others think that cinema should not
releasedChange the verb form
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violent
movies
anymore.
This
essay is going to discuss both views and give the writer's own opinion.
In theChange preposition
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first viewpoint that the government should regulate violent
films
might be a reasonable activity to decline the negative impact which
movies
bring. Young people after watching some of these violent
films
might commit real-life crimes. Because they think that everyone using
violence
like in
films
so Correct word choice
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the
violence
beingAdd a missing verb
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normalized day by day. From
this
kind of thinking
way
,
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communication can easily
to Fix the infinitive
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have false beliefs and cause many
kindChange to a plural noun
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of crimes.
That is
why
regulateWrong verb form
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and
fineWrong verb form
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levels of violent
movies
will reduce a big amount of criminals.
This
solution not only
coverChange the verb form
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but
also
still
releaseCorrect subject-verb agreement
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some
movies
for citizens to watch
they
boredAdd a missing verb
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.
Turning to the second point of view, other individuals believe that violent
films
should not be released in public.
This
way
can radically
reducedChange the verb form
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violence
compared to the first idea.
However
, it might decline the knowledge about wars and terrorism and it might
makeVerb problem
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people
easier Correct word choice
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to
beingWrong verb form
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bullied and
sufferedWrong verb form
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violence
.
Movies
might be so violent but thinking another
way
,
itCorrect pronoun usage
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kind of nearly
the Correct article usage
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real life so citizens can
also
learn
some Correct quantifier usage
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more with
movies
. Because of
this
situation, the
way
which is violent
films
will not be released in future can not be able.
Taking
into account, the first solution is still better than the latter when
violence
still be fined but individuals can know how criminals work outside there.