The line graph show the number of visitors in 4 particular place in Vietnam from 1980 to 2020

The line graph show the number of visitors in 4 particular place in Vietnam from 1980 to 2020
The given line graph demonstrates that
people
visited 4 different destinations in Vietnam between 1980 and 2020.
Overall
, it can be obviously seen
people
visiting the exhibition
along with
the pagoda increased
while
the
museum
and public park went down over the given period.
Additionally
,
although
the
museum
had the most
visitors
in the beginning, it was eventually replaced by the pagoda. Looking toward two special places in Vietnam where
people
visited the exhibition at least in 1980, around 10,000
visitors
, before rapidly going up to reach a peak of 110 000
visitors
by 2000, but
then
it gradually dropped to almost 80 000
visitors
in 2010 and remained steady until the period end. Meanwhile,
people
visiting the pagoda had a significant jump from 10000 in 1980 to nearly 90000 in 2020, becoming the most destination
people
were likely to visit. Regarding the remaining places the
museum
and the park started at exactly 100000 and 30000
visitors
in 1980 prior to declining sharply to roughly 30000 and 20000
visitors
in 2020. As for the
museum
, it continued to grow minimally before dropping down to 30000
visitors
again
at the end
of the period.
Similarly
, the public park saw a noticeable decrease to just under 5000
visitors
in 2000.
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