The bar graph shows the number of man and woman participants in the olympics between 1924 to 2012

The bar graph shows the number of man and woman participants in the olympics between 1924 to 2012
The bar graph and line graph illustrate the
girls
and boys who took part in the Olympic games from 1924 to 2012 in different countries.
Overall
, the total number of participants increased over the time every Olympic game was organised. Gentlemen always dominated the
girls
from the initial
years
to the
last
years
. Ladies were low in numbers from starting of the games, and showed less interest,
while
men increased in each and every game,
however
, it can be seen the gap is reducing year by year. It is conspicuous that the total number of players who took part was 3000 in the year 1924, with a majority of gents about 2800 as compared to females who were only 200. After a period of 28
years
, men increased to 4500 in 1952, which was higher than
girls
, who were nearly 500. Probing ahead, after a gap of 32
years
, in 1984 the total number of participants who took part was nearly 6700 which showed 5200 guys and 1500 ladies. There was a sharp increase in both genders, dudes reached nearly 5800
whereas
girls
jumped close to 4800 in 2012 with a gap of 28
years
. It shows
girls
started interested in the Olympic games.
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  • gender ratio
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  • significant gap
  • gradual increase
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