many people like to wear a fashionable clothes. What is the reason for that, do you think this is a good or a bad thing?
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reasons
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of people like to look rich and glamorise like high Correct your spelling
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school
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teenagers
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these
clothes
means they can buy whatever they want because thats
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that's
that
they
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apply
for example
, teenagers in privite
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private
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to buy fashionable Change the verb form
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clothes
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kids .
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wealthy
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large
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prefer
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apply
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of
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specially for individuals who have sensitive skin and can not wear any unknown random fabric . Correct article usage
the skin
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example
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example,
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women
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tend
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Zara
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.
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quality
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the end , the number of people who likes to wear Change the preposition
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a
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apply
clothes
is incresing
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increasing
everyday
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them the feeling of Change the verb form
gives
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being
also
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provides
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