In manay countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, the immigration rate from village to town

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increasing globally, which caused a significant decline in

rural

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the rural

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population.

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phenomenon has tremendous negative impacts, not only on the

counrtysides

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countrysides

countryside

but

also

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on the

cities

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. The forthcoming essay shall discuss the drawbacks of

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massive

migrants

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and explain the reasons that I think

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is a negative progress. Moving people from villages to big

cities

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for seeking

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better opportunities might have several disadvantages.

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with, the majority of migrants

usaully

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usually

are from the young generations which

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a noticeable decrease in the work

labor

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labour

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force in small societies and

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rural jobs,

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as farming, have to be done by

elderies

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elderlies

elders

. As

consequence

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,

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would directly

inffluence

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influence

on the area’s

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economy

and lead the countryside to poverty.

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, as the

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number

of migrants

grow

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, the quality of the facilities like schools and hospitals

drop

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drops

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, and there are not any sophisticated employees to work in

these field

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. The are

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various

disadvatages

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disadvantages

for big

cities

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.

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, the population

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dramatically without any predictions, which caused terrible

congestions

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and pollution.

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, the housing prices are skyrocketed,

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, the job vacancies are dropped

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the high numbers of unemployee.

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, the crime rate in the

cities

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will rise because the rural people might not be able to earn

enogh

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enough

money in order to cover their life expenses, so they ought to commit a crime. In conclusion,

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form of immigration

definetly

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definitely

have

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destructive effects on

the

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both areas. In my opinion, the government must implement some laws to improve the countryside’s facilities so the youngster

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to stay and work in their hometown.