Some
parents
believe that
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plays a negative role in watching
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their
children
,
whereas
others argue that it still has
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on
children
's growth. Both views
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hold valid justifications,
however
, I support the former viewpoint as I believe that
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adults can not prevent the imitation of their
children
from the wrong behaviours
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television
.
The modern way of thinking is watching
TV
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not benefit
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most
children
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some reason. It is easy to recognize that
children
are influenced badly by some
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in censored
censored
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in
this
day and age. They want to attract
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television
viewers so they decide to add some violent or unrealistic details
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children
's curiosity. Unfortunately, they do not have
rightCorrect article usage
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supervisors from their
parents
.
Thus
,
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in imitation of wrong
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which they watch
inChange preposition
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television
. Take a recent article by some Vietnamese teenagers as an example where there are lots of trends which develop from many global
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. They completely imitate some characters throughout their styles or actions,
Moreover
, they can not control their
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with others, regardless of their friends and
parents
. They
also
have some violent
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withChange preposition
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their
parents
when they are not pleased with some
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ideas because they lean towards
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some action movies watched by them.
Consequently
, the growth of
children
in their near future is impacted completely by the terrible programme and
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inChange preposition
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television
and
outCorrect your spelling
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community becomes worse than ever before they could be
due to
some bad elements.
By contrast
, in
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contemporary society, it is recommended that
children
should
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to approach
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television
and technology devices to gain more
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latest news and have more experiences
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lots of areas in their lives.
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reason,
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televisions
also
have some educational
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for watching and following them to improve themselves. Some scientists
also
rate and give
feedbacksFix the agreement mistake
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forChange preposition
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parents
to let their
children
engage in some useful
appropriate channels.
For instance
, there are some advertisements between some presentation cartoons which add some available details for
children
's achievement.
Moreover
,
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YoutubeCorrect your spelling
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Kids is the best choice for all
parents
who are
busy
to superviseChange the verb form
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their
children
anytime because
this
application can help
parents
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violent
contentsFix the agreement mistake
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or
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lots of educational
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channels and videos for
youngCorrect word choice
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generations.
As a result
, the growth of
children
may not be affected by the negative and violent programmes
inChange preposition
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television
in any way.
From my personal experience, the activity of watching
TV
has
negativeAdd an article
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influence on both physical and mental health
while
are growing up. In light
toChange preposition
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this
, most
children
spend all their time enjoying some favourite channels. After that, they are attacked indirectly by their laziness and they
also
cause obesity quickly.
,
children
also
from some
diseaseFix the agreement mistake
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aboutChange preposition
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their weight and
neutronsFix the agreement mistake
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system. The most terrible consequence of watching
TV
a lot when they are so young is reducing their life span and easily
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depressionReplace the word
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when they get older. They are not only afraid and shy
directlyChange the word
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sommunicationCorrect your spelling
communication
communicating
with others but they
also
prevent themselves
takingChange preposition
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part in some outdoor activities to have
healthyCorrect article usage
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lifestyle day by day.
In conclusion, the author fully
supportChange the verb form
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the former notion that
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television
may
bringsChange the verb form
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benefits for
children
in any way and
theyCorrect pronoun usage
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also
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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some undeniable consequences for them at getting older.
Hence
,
children
should be allowed
watchingChange the verb form
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TV
under their
parents
' control every time.