Being independent after 18 has
negative and positive sides
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the positive effects are more than the negatives.
When a teenager starts living
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her/his own
, they learn how to manage their
money
in a way that they find out gradually not to spend all of their allowance on throwing parties or hanging out with their friends but
also
saving
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money
for the future.
For instance
, in the first month that they feel free from
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opinions and plans, some of them start to
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parties and
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drinks for their companions. Ultimately, after one or two months
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they will be out of
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money
and nothing will
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to live with for the rest of the month, they'll comprehensively figure
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out that their
money
is not just for passing
time
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people.
Furthermore
in order to live separately, most of them feel the need
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and
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their own income so that they don't have to explain everything to their
parents
again.
This
is a great way for them to know both sides of the future path and living alone as well. At
this
time
, they will decide whether they want to continue their studies or
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school to enter into the business world.
Although
most of the young generation feel happy and free when they choose to live away from
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family, there are a minor group of them that will
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a wrong path
such
as addiction to drugs or leaving university to waste all of their
time
just for hanging out with friends. Another negative point of living alone or sharing
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room with another person is that there would be no ready
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meals anymore. The person has to manage the
time
perfectly to have
time
for cooking as well.
Also
, these are
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generation who have no experience
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living
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of their parent's home. They will certainly miss home in hard times or in problems which they have to solve all
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their own.
In conclusion, living alone after school has both positive and negative side effects
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on the person's decision and the way they will choose. In the meantime,
parents
can offer them their help
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hard situations so that they would know that they are not alone and their
parents
haven't left them alone.