The diagram illustrates the number of shops in the situation of close and open in one country from 2011 to 2018.

The diagram illustrates the number of shops in the situation of close and open in one country from 2011 to 2018.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram illustrates the number of shops in the situation of close and open in one country from 2011 to 2018.
The graph shows how many
shops
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were
close
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and
open
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opened
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in one country between 2011 and 2018. Units are measured in
number
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.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that there were no specific
trend
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since
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both fluctuated throughout the given period.
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, in general, we can say that the
number
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of
shops
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that were closed and opened fell over the seven years. In terms of the total
shops
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that were closed, the
number
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of closed
shops
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started at approximately 8500.
Thereafter
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the
number
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drastically declined to 4000 before going up and
then
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went down again.
In
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2015 until 2016, the closed
shops
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remained steady at exactly 4000.
Then
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, the
number
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hit a trough at precisely 3000 in the
last
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period. Regarding the
shops
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in the situation of open, the total of opened
shops
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stood at nearly 6500. In the following years, the
number
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witnessed a gradual rise and down. In 2014, the opened stores had a dramatic decrease to just under 1000 but
then
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significantly grew to just above 5000. The
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number
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relatively stable until 2018.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • illustrates
  • number of shops
  • situation
  • close
  • open
  • country
  • 2011
  • 2018
  • overview
  • year-wise
  • comparison
  • trend analysis
  • increase
  • decrease
  • reasons
  • future prediction
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