The Map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The Map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps present the industrial
area
, which is located in the
town
of Norbiton, and its plans for
for
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the future.
Overall
, whilst the location of the
town
relative to the
farmland
and the roundabout remain the same, the type of buildings will change drastically and alongside it the roads connecting the
area
.
For example
, there will be a new road built
further
up across the river and a second roundabout will be constructed
further
south. As the industrial
area
currently stands, there is a
noticable
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noticeable
roundabout situated to the East of the
town
.
This
allows for greater connectivity with parts
further
down south of the roundabout and with the
factories
located south to the
farmland
, and east to the roundabout. The road on the East side of the map has clusters of
factories
on either
sides
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, which is
also
true for the roundabout located in the
center
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.
Although
the
area
contains a
town
to the West and
a
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farmland
to the North, its present state means that the
area
is relatively sparse, with a majority prevalence of
factories
. The plans for Norbiton in the future are somewhat different. Where the
factories
are located currently, they will be replaced by an extensive
construction
of new housing in both
Eastern
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and Western parts of the industrial
area
.
However
, housing isn't the only planned
construction
. Facilities
such
as shops and medical
centers
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are planned to be constructed and scattered across the
area
, which will mean that there will be a Playground and a School located near the newly constructed housing.
Therefore
, it's clear that when
comparing
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with the present situation, the
area
is projected to contain a higher variety of buildings.
Furthermore
, a road extension is expected to be built, extending north across the river.
This
is expected to be accompanied by another
construction
of housing in the
farmland
zone, allowing access to the
farmland
which previously contained no type of
construction
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, town, farmland, factories, construction with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
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