The Map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps present the industrial
area
, which is located in the town
of Norbiton, and its plans for for
the future.
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Overall
, whilst the location of the town
relative to the farmland
and the roundabout remain the same, the type of buildings will change drastically and alongside it the roads connecting the area
. For example
, there will be a new road built further
up across the river and a second roundabout will be constructed further
south.
As the industrial area
currently stands, there is a noticable
roundabout situated to the East of the Correct your spelling
noticeable
town
. This
allows for greater connectivity with parts further
down south of the roundabout and with the factories
located south to the farmland
, and east to the roundabout. The road on the East side of the map has clusters of factories
on either sides
, which is Change to a singular noun
side
also
true for the roundabout located in the center
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centre
Although
the area
contains a town
to the West and a
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farmland
to the North, its present state means that the area
is relatively sparse, with a majority prevalence of factories
.
The plans for Norbiton in the future are somewhat different. Where the factories
are located currently, they will be replaced by an extensive construction
of new housing in both Eastern
and Western parts of the industrial Correct article usage
the Eastern
area
. However
, housing isn't the only planned construction
. Facilities such
as shops and medical centers
are planned to be constructed and scattered across the Change the spelling
centres
area
, which will mean that there will be a Playground and a School located near the newly constructed housing. Therefore
, it's clear that when comparing
with the present situation, the Wrong verb form
compared
area
is projected to contain a higher variety of buildings. Furthermore
, a road extension is expected to be built, extending north across the river. This
is expected to be accompanied by another construction
of housing in the farmland
zone, allowing access to the farmland
which previously contained no type of construction
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