The supplied line graph illustrates the proportion of
Australian
population who Correct article usage
the Australian
works
for 5 industries Wrong verb form
worked
during
1962 till 2012.
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from
Overall
, the line graph includes Linking Words
workforce
in services, construction and mining with Correct article usage
the workforce
uptrend
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an uptrend
while
three other sections Linking Words
such
as manufacturing and agriculture with downtrend.
The noticeable change occurred in services and it started from 52% in 1962 and reached Linking Words
to
78% in 2012. Change preposition
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Moreover
, the mining workforce was 2% in the first year, and it slightly increased to approximately 5% in the Linking Words
last
year. Linking Words
Likewise
, construction experienced the same pattern with 9% to 11% in 1962 and 2012 respectively.
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Additionally
, manufacturing workers were 25% and it remained flat until 1972, but went continuously down during the years and reached Linking Words
to
10% in 2012. Change preposition
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Furthermore
, people who work in agriculture were 11% of Linking Words
Australian
workforce at first and the Correct article usage
the Australian
numbers
of them Fix the agreement mistake
number
was fluctuated
, and Change to the active voice
fluctuated
has fluctuated
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finally
it became to near 6% in 2012.Add a comma
finally,